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Realization
Contributed by
black-bruised-n-broken
on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 06:50:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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as i sit here on my bed,
looking at the knife in my hand
then looking at my wrist,
tears start to fall down my face
as i realise what i've done,
eye lids getting heavy,
blood running out my wrist,
quickly writting a note on the wall
saying "sorry but this is the only way out"
finally falling to the floor,
no one home to hear me
yell out in pain,
blood now staining the once clean floor
my eyes now closing
never to open again
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black-bruised-n-broken
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2005-08-24 06:50:09]
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Re: Realization
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:05:00 AM AEST
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i like this poem, i dont think its bad at all. it's simple and yet very powerful.
keep it up |
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Re: Realization
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:10:11 AM AEST
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| For being your first poem, it's excellent. Not bad at all. I look forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: Realization
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 06:01:42 AM AEST
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Just because it's the first poem it doesn't mean it's bad. Well, it's not bad anyway. You do really nice with descriptions, creating a good environment. Welcome to YPDC.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Realization
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by SlaveToTheUnknown on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 06:28:46 AM AEST
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| this is a good poem. |
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