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To Savanna (I will...)
Contributed by
bobotheclown
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Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:01:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I will be there,
When no one else is
I will give you joy,
When there is only sorrow
I will give you a hug,
For every minute of sadness
I will give you a kiss,
For every tear you cry
I will give you hope,
When everything seems hopeless
I will hold you,
As yesterday fades away into today
Because nothing matters except you
I will be your strength,
When you are weak
I would take away all your pain,
If it would mean your eternal happiness
I would walk on broken glass,
To see a smile touch your face
I would lie with you,
Just to feel your heartbeat against mine
I will be your rock,
When everything else is crumbling
And I will stand with you
Because together, we will beat this
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Re: To Savanna (I will...)
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:23:10 AM AEST
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Hi Joel, great to see one of your poems again. This is such a comforting write..I'm sure it is greatly appreciated...and will be treasured for many years......
I love it!!!!
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: To Savanna (I will...)
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:27:40 AM AEST
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Joel this leaves a calm and powerful feeling. Your one heck of a guy to put your heart out like this. You shine my friend.
Michelle |
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Re: To Savanna (I will...)
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by waos on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:44:38 AM AEST
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Like I said earlier when you showed me this, this is a real sweet poem and I
wish you and Savanna the best.
~Kara |
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Re: To Savanna (I will...)
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:02:09 AM AEST
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A piece full of beauty and hope, Joel. All the best! And Savanna is a lovely name, methinks.
Andrew |
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Re: To Savanna (I will...)
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 02:00:29 AM AEST
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awww so very sweet and yet powerful.
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Re: To Savanna (I will...)
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by emphaticplacebo on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:35:04 AM AEST
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Really nice write, buddy. Top job!
Very positive and reassuring, Im sure the special person you wrote this for would be feeling the love and security that exudes from this poem. I hope you continue writing so we can read more
Dan |
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Re: To Savanna (I will...)
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by FleurdeSang on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:59:29 PM AEST
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Oh, my dear friend, endless blessings and love to you both!! I am so happy that you have found someone that instills within you a sense of hope and joy! ^.^ It's such a wonderful feeling to see a friend in love and happy! This write just... breathes! It's so vivid and beautiful, and I believe many can relate to this luscious and grand feeling that you have so eloquently expressed here! *Massive huggles* I can never fully describe just HOW happy I am for you both. Let it last forever... You deserve those precious moments with her, Joel... and so much more. All my love and best wishes to you both!!!! Exquisite write, cheri! Keep that flame of hope and love burning, deary!! Forever,
Your dear friend,
~*Stephy*~ |
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