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Another Time, Another Face (Part 2)
Contributed by
CrazyCowboy557
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Next door an angel sat
In her chair every afternoon
Her jokes I laughed at
It ended much too soon
She'd walk home at four
After the bus dropped her off
She left me wanting more
The touch of her skin so soft
In my mind I walk back
To that front porch so small
I find my self getting off track
At the beginning of Fall
Nights on the trampoline
Or just sitting and talking
Her face can still be seen
My mind it's still stalking
I loved her with all my heart
She never knew
While she was tearing others apart
My love only grew
That night my heart fell flat
Lying under a harvest moon
Her chair I always sat
Her leaving like a monsoon
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CrazyCowboy557
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2005-08-23 23:43:21]
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2)
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:35:40 AM AEST
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a flowing poem so touching and serene
loved the touch of the harvest moon too
welcome to ypdc
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2)
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 09:03:38 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC...hope you like it here...and hope to see more of your work..
Jenni |
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2)
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:09:10 AM AEST
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| Thanks to everyone for the warm welcome and I'm glad you liked my poem, I have many others, and will be posting one everyday. |
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2)
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by anitajames on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 10:30:16 AM AEST
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| beautiful. Reminds me of the boy accross the street that I fell for when I was 16. |
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Re: Another Time, Another Face (Part 2)
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 04:34:59 PM AEST
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Welcome Cowboy! Love your poem. Will be looking for more. YPDC is a great place.
Smiles,
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