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My Lady Fair
Contributed by
wizard
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 08:34:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My lady fair tonight not there
Yet still my heart she holds,
In her place an empty space;
So desolate and cold.
In my dreams her beauty gleams
Like a rainbow through my mind,
But when I wake my heart will ache
For her I cannot find.
My heart grows fonder each time I ponder
The first time that we kissed...
And of our last night when I held her tight
With not one feeling missed.
Though of her beauty I'm blinded I'm also reminded
Of her magical allure,
Her perfect form and touch so warm...
Her everything so pure.
Perhaps tomorrow will end my sorrow
And she'll be by my side,
Until then I'll dream again
For there she cannot hide.
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wizard
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 08:49:55 PM AEST
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I loved the rhyme scheme in this, Wizard... Wonderfully executed!!
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:34:36 PM AEST
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| This is cool. It seems like a sorrow joy relationship. Great write though. |
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:11:26 PM AEST
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Hey Wiz, this is wonderfully presented. The rhyme is perfection. Flowed like a sweet clean brook. wishing you every happiness.
Rita |
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by brew on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:24:44 PM AEST
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Simply, flowing and with such beauty, for the dream of one.!
Brew~ |
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 06:58:56 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem of lost love.I'm sure she dioesn't want to hide, Ros |
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:52:13 PM AEST
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This is such a dreamy, and touching poem, with a great flow. I really enjoyed reading this!
Very nicely done Wiz.
Scorp. |
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:28:27 PM AEST
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"Until then I'll dream again
For there she cannot hide"
Omigosh . . . soft and ever so lovely. Paul, you captured
a beautiful sentiment here. A flawless and so very touching
write.
moved am I . . .
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Re: My Lady Fair
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 02:46:14 PM AEST
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.. can't imagine how this managed to elude me for so long bro.. my apologies..
the composition and timing are flawless..
and the final stanza wraps up perfectly..
it's extraordinary.. this write - I love it.
B |
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