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Faithless Hold
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
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Sitting alone, looking back,
Sorting through the baggage I pack.
I'm going through, pressing rewind,
The answers to my problems I find
Locked up here, in this case,
But some of it I don't want to face.
Forced to watch, can't close my eyes.
My life's built up on filthy lies,
Nothing to do, no way to fix it,
Tossed myself into dispairs bottomless pit.
The tears roll, pain builds,
Never knowing what life yields
Do I stay or do I fold?
I can't break this faithless hold.
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2003-01-14 20:20:00]
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Re: Faithless Hold
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:30:51 AM AEST
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Faithless hold let go my friend
This message to you my heart sends
Stay as you are and do not fold
For your heart truly is made of gold
Don't close your eyes or say goodbye
You wouldn't want to make me cry
But lift yourself and be just you
Write your hearts content...your pen is due...
Beautiful write girl....always you write beautifully and from the heart...nothing more nothing less....that is what i call a masterpiece....thank you for sharing your beauty through your poetry....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Faithless Hold
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by karoody on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:15:58 AM AEST
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| i really liked this. stay strong, push forward and please never ever fold. |
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