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Five Little Pills
Contributed by
xXx_lil_pyro_xXx
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:34:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Five little pills,
Full of stuff that makes you sleep.
Five little pills,
Should I toss or should i keep?
Five little pills,
Could be enough to over dose.
Using those five little pills,
Could make the out come gross.
Five little pills,
Can make all my pain subside.
Five little pills,
Can cause my suicide.
Five little pills,
Could take everything from me.
But then again those five little pills,
Could finally set me free.
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Re: Five Little Pills
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:40:13 PM AEST
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| Very interesting concept, but those five little pills wont stop your pain, if you take five little pills and die, your body will perish, but then again your pain will drive you more insane. The-brokn-rose. Find a different way to end your pain, without hurting yourself, you do not need any more suffering, to yourself. |
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Re: Five Little Pills
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:40:56 PM AEST
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| A very good write, well done. It's true that five little pills could cause such misery! You'd have to make sure there were five little pills for everyone who loved you so in their torment over the suicide they could all follow you!! A brilliant read! |
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Re: Five Little Pills
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:55:04 PM AEST
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| It is always harder to keep living through the hard times because that always takes courage. It does not take courage to kill yourself. Your poem while good has the wrong motive unless it helps you survive for one more day so that you can reconsider |
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Re: Five Little Pills
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:36:00 AM AEST
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| Very good write. I know this feeling very well. Not wanting to live and think that everything will be better w/out you in it. I still think that way but for some reason something keeps me here. Hope that you find that something. Good luck |
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Re: Five Little Pills
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:36:40 AM AEST
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| a great poem karis, but what would i do without you? |
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Re: Five Little Pills
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:03:49 PM AEST
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great poem... I liked it alot..
christina |
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