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If my life was a color
Contributed by
tecnorobo
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:24:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If my life was a color
My color'd be clear
No definition
No color'd be near
Or close to resembling
This color of mine
My life's always changing
Or atleast i'm coming to find
that this life's an adventure
take one day at a time
unless you'd prefer
having a cluttered mind-
cluttered with past and future
cluttered with things of no matter
lose focus and begin climbing the ladder
to nowhere, to worry, to struggle and sadness
but,
bring back your focus and realize there's gladness
to be had with just one day at a time...
slowly you will be coming to find
that a colorless life is a life with no worry
reason to slow down, and reason not to hurry
and believe me this colorless life that you lead
is not colorless
but colorfull indeed.
A happy day- light blue,
A boring one- grey.
Many events
translate to a colorful day...
But all of this translates to a color so clear
because each day is new
and each day you'll hold dear
this day is your first, and this day is your last.
There may be no tommorow
and yesterday's passed.
So live each day well and have no regrets
Move on from mistakes, so you can face whats next...
If my life was a color my color'd be clear
My life's not a color, but I'll still hold it dear.
Living life to it's fullest i'm coming to find
You must live for the now, not for then, not behind.
Copyright ©
tecnorobo
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2005-08-23 19:24:35]
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Re: If my life was a color
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:28:05 PM AEST
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| I don't recall your name but I just read this poem, needs work? I don't think it needs work at all, I think it is perfect, I loved it. SLipSiX. I knwo how you feel sometimes I feel as if my life is all gray but then sometimes I just feel good listenening to my music alone, heh. Keep up the good work. The-brokn-rose. |
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Re: If my life was a color
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by Manda2 on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:37:02 PM AEST
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| Brilliant write and very true, well done! |
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Re: If my life was a color
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:39:44 PM AEST
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| There is great widom in your poem. This is very inspiring |
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Re: If my life was a color
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by brew on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:31:55 PM AEST
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Good images, on colors, and what you perceive, on all.! I love colors, and I would be green, or red.! Some mischevious, and some angel......thats why those to colors. Loved the post.!
Brew~
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Re: If my life was a color
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 05:48:25 PM AEST
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This poem is very bright.. clean and clear and untroubled, enough to see those.. clear... colors..
A lot of us are transparent, its not hard to see the heart.. in someone..yours is a pretty clear heart..
Beautiful Poem
Raquel Leah :D
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