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<3 Me
Contributed by
Shnannon
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:18:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Dear _______,
Everytime I see you, my heart skips a beat.
Everytime I talk to you, my voice shakes.
Everytime I'm near you, I feel like I'm going to explode with all the things I want to tell you.
Everytime you leave, a small part of me leaves with you.
Everytime I dream of you, I wake up with a smile on my face.
Everytime I think of you, my day is suddenly brighter.
Everytime I imagine what could be, it turns out perfectly.
Maybe someday I'll even write your name
in that blank and send this to you.
Maybe someday I won't be so afraid to say...
I love you!
<3 Me
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-08-23 19:18:07]
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Re: <3 Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:30:43 PM AEST
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| A very sweet and beautiful poem, I loved it, I could feel it in my heart as I read it. Thank you for sharing it. Keep up the great work!! SLipSiX. |
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Re: <3 Me
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:36:03 PM AEST
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Great poem and it reminds me of a song.
"If you feel like leaving
you know you can go
why don't you stay until tomorrow
If you want to be free
you know all you have to do is say so
When you feel cold
I'll warm you
and when you feel you can't go on
I'll come and hold you
It's you and me forever
Sara smile"
Quote from "Sara smile" by Darryl Hall and John Oates
Your poem is a good dedication to a love you want to be. |
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Re: <3 Me
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by syenn0512 on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:55:33 PM AEST
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I wish I can write someone's name in that blank space too.
good job!...keep it up |
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Re: <3 Me
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:56:30 PM AEST
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secret loves are tantalising
sweet is this flow |
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Re: <3 Me
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by CoLD on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 01:28:45 PM AEST
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That is such an awesome poem, I've felt that way for someone too... and the best moment I had was the relief and clarity I felt sending him something telling him how I feel (I mean it didn't work out, apparently he didn't feel the same, but it was better to know the truth then to hold on to all those mislead dreams)
Good luck |
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