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WonderLand

Contributed by BtrFlyDrms on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:13:18 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Looking through your life in the double sided mirror,this isnt how you dreamed it would be.
It amazes me how you got this far in such a short amount of time cuz we never saw it comming.
You had the love, the life, the kids.....the fairytale had come true...
But even roses look beautiful if you forget they have thorns.
So much of your life has been turned upside down,pulled from beneath you and twisted so tightly-
it was as if you didnt know how to breath,forgot how to stand on your own 2 feet and the whole time your main concern was how your kids would get by when they wake up and cry out for daddy!
You didnt know how to get through it,but you did!

You been though alot in what seems like forever,you turn to those who care and cry,
your life takes on so much drama from the moment you wake up,get up and do what you can for the kids,see them off,go to a job that you hate,put in your time,go home,make dinner,take on the roll of mother and father,kiss and tuck your kids in,go to bed just to do it all over again when the alarm awakens you from your dreams that go bump in the night.

Alot of times you ask me *why* and belive me I understand,
But I wish you could see yourself the way I do through the mirror of Life my dear friend.
You have More strength then you realize,you stand once again on your own 2 feet,
you do the best you can with what you've got and dream of a better childhood for your kids!
Yes,they are who really suffer the most and No,it is not right or fair.
But they will live,learn and grow up strong from watching what you do.
You've done a Great job,let no one tell you less!

Somewhere in this mix within the madness,you WILL over come all this!
Life lessons are never ending and we are never sure how they will come to us,
But no matter what- I believe In you and slowly you are beliving in yourself again!
You will walk with your head held high in no time and be more cautious with in your heart,
Life truly has great things for you ahead,you just havent gotten there yet-But you will!
Life IS after all-Its Very Own Wonderland.









Copyright © BtrFlyDrms ... [ 2005-08-23 19:13:18]
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Re: WonderLand (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:26:01 PM AEST
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This is not what I expected. It is better. A song comes to mind from this:

"Hang on to the world as it spins around
Just don't let the spin get you down
Things are moving fast
Hold on tight and you will last
Keep your self respect your many proud
Get yourself in gear keep your stride
Nevermind your fears
Brighter days will soon be here
Take it from me someday we'll all be free"

Quote from "Someday we'll be free" by Donny Hatherway

Your poem is awesome!


Re: WonderLand (User Rating: 1 )
by Manda2 on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:46:25 PM AEST
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Anyone would survive through anything with a friend like you! Brilliant write.




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