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Girl in the mirror
Contributed by
JenJen
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:43:34 PM in AEST
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There's a girl in the mirror
I wonder who she is
Sometimes I think I know her
Sometimes I really wish I did
There's a girl in my mirror
Just staring back at me
She looks so pale
As she smiles at thea
There's a girl in my mirror
I wonder who she is
Sometimes I think I know her
Sometimes I really wish I did
There's a girl in my mirror
I can't believe what I see
The girl in my mirror...
Is me
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2005-08-23 16:43:34]
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:04:43 PM AEST
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| Self "reflection" is always good. This is a great poem for that. |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:07:21 PM AEST
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| good write. Your not the only one who thinks like that. Liked the poem. |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by THEL0STDREAMER on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:08:43 PM AEST
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| this is a good poem.. the self reflection (unintentional pun) is good... it's also a very good way of comparing who we see inside us and how we see ourselves in the mirror. |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by Shattered_soul on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:30:19 PM AEST
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I liked your poem, When I see the girl in my mirror I never know who I am really looking at because my reflections are never what I expect them to be.
S.S |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:24:04 PM AEST
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| i really like this. i think we all have moments when we don't entirely recognize the person staring back at us in the mirror. great poem, keep up the good work |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:24:33 PM AEST
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| This a good poem, though why does it seem so familiar? It seems as if I read it before? Have you posted it before? Confussled. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by gery_giggles on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:05:54 PM AEST
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good poem, sometimes the reflection in the mirrior is a stranger.
luv |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 08:35:05 AM AEST
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| hey jens, great poem!! i really like it, well done |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by Calliope on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 12:57:17 PM AEST
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| Hey this is really good!Sometimes I feel this way too!lol.Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by Black_Dragon on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 10:32:40 PM AEST
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| ooh it is awesome |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by jemer on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:32:22 AM AEST
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| ooo mysterious, but then at the end every1s like woah thats kl |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 12:43:28 PM AEST
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AWESOME POEM!!!! i wrote one very similar to this called "that girl"
mine ends the same way yours does! lol
as they say, great minds think alike :D lol
luv yoo!
from: girl with many names |
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Re: Girl in the mirror
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by kcampbell on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 09:29:30 AM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. I love it! |
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