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Will you?
Contributed by
Calliope
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:26:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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May I ask you something?
If I started to cry would you dry my eyes?
If I got hurt would you stop and help me?
If my heart was broken would you let me cry on your shoulder until it was over?
Would you forget me?
Would you ever ditch me?
Would you ever stop caring?
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Calliope
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Re: Will you?
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by JenJen on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:30:17 PM AEST
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this is such a sweet poem! i have a close male friend who is going out with my best friend and she thinks i have a crush on him but we just get on really well! i sometimes feel that i need a shoulder to cry on but i never know who to turn to! this poem is really well written and thank you for writting it! it has helped me a lot!
all my love hope and hugges
jenny
xxx
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Re: Will you?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:09:27 PM AEST
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| Good write. I know how that feels and i always wander to myself if he would. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Will you?
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by THEL0STDREAMER on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:12:11 PM AEST
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| i know what this feels like, and i know that it hurts, and i also know that it isn't easy to let it out. good job =] i liked it |
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Re: Will you?
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:22:25 PM AEST
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| Great poem. And this is a great question to ask to some one with a secret crush. |
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Re: Will you?
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by Shnyzz on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:28:02 PM AEST
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| i beleive this is a poem that applies to everybody. To say that this was great would be generic and obvious. Keepn on writing. |
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Re: Will you?
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by Shattered_soul on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:36:45 PM AEST
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I think I may have felt this way... Once, but then they stole my heart away.... Crushed. I hope these questions will come to my mind with another someday.
S.S
P.S Nice write |
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Re: Will you?
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 07:46:37 PM AEST
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I like this. A plea from the heart, and a beautiful one.
Take care.
David |
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