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Missing you
Contributed by
PolarBear
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:49:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I have beeen missing you. If you would listen I would tell you true I am missing you. It seems an atternety waiting to see you. I wish for once you could see me the way I see you. It was love at first site when I first met you, but as we have moved on I have been regreting not staying with someone as spiecial and kind as you. I know you must have forgotten all about me but it is the oppisit with thee. If you would give me time I would say I am sorry and I am missing someonne spiecial that is you. I love you.
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Re: Missing you
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:37:46 PM AEST
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This reminds me of a song I wrote
"I waiting for you to return
from the place that you have gone
I remember when we used to talk
at this very place
We had to go away and live our dreams
saying that we'd one day meet again
I have been here waiting for the past few years
hoping for that very special day"
Quote from "Say You Will"
This is a very good write your words are haunting like a sad melody that plays in a lonely bar. |
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Re: Missing you
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by Shnannon on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 07:29:16 PM AEST
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| this is kinda sad, and i'm sure very heartfelt. i know the feeling. great write |
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