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THE DESERT
Contributed by
chazthepoet
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:09:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Deep and unforgiving,
Each grain of sand
One atom in the universe of
The vast killer,
The Deadly desert,
Like a python,
It slowly coils its way around you until
You are no more,
It takes your water,
It makes you weak,
It dries you
As if you were another cacti
In this Wasteland,
This fatal Wasteland,
No life,
No life exept for the Crawling
Creatures,
The still plants,
And the merciless
All seeing
All knowing
Desert.
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chazthepoet
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2005-08-23 14:09:19]
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Re: THE DESERT
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:23:06 PM AEST
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| This is true and reminds me of a scripture where David says I long to be with my God i'm in a dry and thirsty land where there is no water. |
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Re: THE DESERT
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:39:01 PM AEST
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| Yes I understand what you mean, I could picture this in my mind. |
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Re: THE DESERT
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:51:20 PM AEST
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I do understand this I live in the desert
nicely done
Michelle |
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Re: THE DESERT
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:07:19 PM AEST
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I got the outer limits stuck in my head..
You know.. I have visited the desert.. I don't especially care for it..
I know enough of it with your write in order to understand the dryness of it.. I have a ball python.. his name is Stinky.. he is eating 2 mice now.. lol.. 2 yr old snake... he won't hurt you.. he kisses me too.. I do like reptiles..
I have an iguana named sweetpea, she fights me for pork n beans, mac n cheese and Kale.. the sun is leaving, so her green body is paling out.. she loves me to pick at her scales lol... I have a pic of me and sweet pea.. if you ever decide you want to see her.. lol. lol... I promise I wont tell my reptile babies about your poem, it might freak them out lol lol... jk.. I love this write.. I really got into it, can't you tell..
Hey, if you don't see me typing sentences after sentences in a write, you know I am not here.. 5 stars.. if I could .. well I punched the 5 ok... let me know when you post more.. you are worth the mouse trip....
Raquel Leah ; )) |
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