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The Perfect Guy
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:34:50 AM in AEST
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I feel like I’m soaring in the sky,
Now that I’m with the perfect guy
In your arms I fell especially safe
And I’m beginning to have more faith
You always know how to make me smile
And then you tackle me and we fall in a pile
(Chorus)
Whenever you wrap your arms around me
I start to believe in the birds and the bees
And nevermore do I cry,
Not with the perfect guy
After our pile, you pull me off of the ground
You look in my eyes and our breaths- the only sounds
And then, all of a sudden, we both break into laughter
Others see us and say, ‘And they lived happily ever after’,
Then you pull me to your bed so you and I can rest
And I am smiling when I set my head on your chest
(Chorus)
Whenever I’m feeling sad and down,
You put your magic eraser to my frown
I feel your arms around me as you pull me close to you
As I feel your lips against mine, I wonder- are you true?
When I pull back, I wonder why?
Why did God send this perfect guy?
(Chorus)
One day, I walk right up to you and I hug you
You put your arms around me like I wanted you to
I hold you tight and close my eyes and in fear,
I ask you to tell me why you are here,
‘Because I am your perfect guy’,
You laugh and continue, ‘Which is a lie’
I open my eyes and cry out in despair
Because I am hugging the thin air
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:41:26 AM AEST
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| Great meaning. I had a hard time following the rhythym but it was a great song none the less. |
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:42:58 PM AEST
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Ack! How did I know the ending would take a tragic turn! lol Good song though for your first try.
I liked the story your were telling, and even the ending...sort of : )
Nicely done Sprints!
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:51:21 PM AEST
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| i think that would make a great song...i like the story it tells...good write keep it up |
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Re: The Perfect Guy
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by Bones on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 07:43:35 PM AEST
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Whoa!! Ok first off, very nice song, I love it. But the ending! I didn't even see that one coming! I love the way you presented this. The end leaves you hanging! It really provokes thought, thus, it makes it a good song. I really felt a ryhtm while reading it! But, better not trust someone like me to put music to it...it'll just become weird! Sorry, got off subject. But really, awesome song!!
Peace,
Agent Bones
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