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Enchantres
Contributed by
Thewix
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:36:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Let's bring in the slaves
Who will feed me grapes and wine
let's brin in the dancers
who will dance until I'm fat and druk
Let's bring my enchantres
who will entertain me during the night
but let my empire sleep tonight
First we will ride on my indian friend
we will feed him fruit and water
under desert stars our kiss will grow
on this beautiful arabian night
The highpriest tells me to drink my wine
not knowing his is poisened
The landlords bring in their gifts
not knowing I don't want them
the enchantres laughs at me all night long
not knowing my desire
let my empire sleep tonight
After my indian friend a carpet ride
fly to the moon and maybe return
we eat sycomora Figs and drink wine of eternity
While the nile floats on and on
Copyright ©
Thewix
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2005-08-23 10:36:59]
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Re: Enchantres
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by chazthepoet on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:55:11 PM AEST
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very strange and abstract but very good and well written.
also creative |
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Re: Enchantres
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:50:41 PM AEST
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| Be careful that you do not get overthrown in your fantasies. The Antionettes were overthrown for similar fantasies. This is a good write. You show off your desires well. |
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