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A HUG, A KISS
Contributed by
Bruce
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 08:31:30 AM in AEST
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A Hug, A Kiss
Hugs and kisses
from the grandchildren that I love
Being so far away
this is something, I am deprived of
I constantly dream
of holding them in my arms
When we are all together
I am mesmerized by their charms
A handsome young man
and a beautiful young girl
A diamond in the ruff
and a magnificent pearl
Oh, how I love them
words cannot say
It drives me crazy
that they, are so far away
It won't be long now
before I see them again
Until that day
fond memories remain
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-23 08:31:30]
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:36:32 AM AEST
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Great poem. I miss my family too (no grandchildren yet, I'm too young) It is always encouraging when I read a poem like this.
Send them a card it will be good news to them because they probably miss you too.
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by rmcondon on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 09:45:48 AM AEST
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| A lovely poem, it makes me want to see my grandparents more often. |
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:15:34 PM AEST
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Very sweet write, Bruce.
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:44:57 PM AEST
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| Very sweet, a very beautiful poem, I loved it, A handsome young man and a beautiful young girl, a diamond in the ruff and a magnificient pearl, that was my most favorite part, a beautiful write. Keep up the good work. SLipSiX. |
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:27:17 PM AEST
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Bruce, I know exactly how you feel. Two of my four grandsons I only get to see once a year. We stay in contact thru phones and email but it is not the same as being able to touch and hug them. The other two I see almost ever other weekend. Grandchildren are such a gift from God. I am so blessed.
Rita |
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by brew on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:39:17 PM AEST
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Very sweet. i hope to do that exact thing, one day. I just have to find the guy....then have the kids..and then have the grand kids.! LOL.......WEll written, and a nice read.
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 24th August 2005 @ 01:19:56 AM AEST
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precious Bruce and Im sure they miss you just the same.
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Re: A HUG, A KISS
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by paul_x_walker on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 07:33:19 AM AEST
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really good write
loved it
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