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poison
Contributed by
chaos_01
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 06:30:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You Words like poisons
Flowing through my mind
Affecting every thought affecting every memory
Why cant you leave me alone
Turn without a word
Just let my stand in the rain
Let the droplets drench me
without no pain
I can see through you
I can see what your doing
Don't make me do it
But you know you know i will
Your poison invading my body
Making my knee's tremble
and my body feels weak
You had too
You had to make me FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU!
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chaos_01
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2005-08-23 06:30:23]
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Re: poison
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 08:31:00 AM AEST
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| a very powerful poem, well done |
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Re: poison
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:08:17 AM AEST
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| This poem makes me want to ask questions that I probably don't want to know the answers to. Great write. |
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Re: poison
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by seci on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:47:22 AM AEST
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| i truly understand thats why i love this poem. keep writng. your writng skills are beautiful |
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Re: poison
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:48:06 PM AEST
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| I truly understand where you are going with this poem, I to have been in the same situation only instead of a slow acting poisin in my mind, it feels like acid is burning up my brain. SLipSiX. I can relate. |
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Re: poison
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by Galactose on
Saturday, 20th November 2010 @ 05:49:31 PM AEST
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| I like this poem. It suits your name too. The breaking down of the body is the ultimate chaotic experience. |
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