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A MESS OF HEART-BREAK
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:20:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A MESS OF HEART-BREAK
by Robert Davidson
Her pasing took his last spark of life
Left him bereft with only his grief to bear
The last bit of his heart's dream was taken -
A love portion so precious and rare.
A mess of heart-break
Not told in words but in sobs
I miss her so bad
Intrense is my cry as my breaking heart throbs.
I cry out
From the bottomless well of my loneliness
I cry my sorrow aloud
So much ache and sadness, I wear like a ghostly shroud.
A mess of heart-break
Not told in words but in sobs
I miss her so bad
Intrense is my cry as my breaking heart throbs.
He was aware things were closing down for him
As they laid her beneath the broken sod
A man who had wrestled his demon and lost
Was now ready to go home to God.
Copyright ©
robertdavidson
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2005-08-23 05:20:30]
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Re: A MESS OF HEART-BREAK
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:11:54 AM AEST
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| All I can say is wow. Wow! |
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Re: A MESS OF HEART-BREAK
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:03:18 AM AEST
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WONDERFUL!! Brought Tears to my eyes..
So sorry for your heart-break and Lost
May God Bless you
Hugggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: A MESS OF HEART-BREAK
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:51:25 PM AEST
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| A very beautiful write indeed, I loved it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: A MESS OF HEART-BREAK
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by emystar on
Friday, 26th August 2005 @ 01:13:06 AM AEST
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Very sad but u captured these feelings well.
I am so sorry for your loss.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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