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When those words take wing
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:48:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When those words take wing
From your lovely lips
Like heaven sent kisses
Reaching the very depths of me
They give my soul a chance to fly
I can soar above the clouds
When your eyes meet mine
I am in awe and left with out words
When I am with you I
Can’t advert my gaze
I take everything into memory
So that your beauty can chase
My demons away when I close my eyes
When your lips meet mine
I do not need to breathe
Locked in a kiss for ever
A most lovely endeavor
Where it will lead
We will have to wait and see
Till then it is enough
Just to have you in my arms
Sharing my warmth with you
And you yours with me
I know my purpose
Feel my birth
Feel our love move the earth
Change the way the current moves
There is no pain our love cannot sooth
Be one with the ever ebbing tide
On its waves go for a ride
Make raw stone into sapphires
That shine like eyes, a rampant fire
Breathe from your mouth life
Exist only to make you my wife
You are for ever with in my heart
No matter how far we are apart
I know my purpose
It is you
The only love I need to be true
Feel my birth
You give me my worth
You are my treasure
My inspiration, my love, my pleasure
You are my whole world
My world made whole
You are my greatest work of art unfurled
You are my soul
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2005-08-23 01:48:07]
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Re: When those words take wing
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:11:20 AM AEST
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Change the way the current moves
There is no pain our love cannot sooth
Be one with the ever ebbing tide
On its waves go for a ride
Make raw stone into sapphires
That shine like eyes, a rampant fire
This is so beautiful, it is beyond beautiful but right now i'm drawing a blank on a better word, hehe, muaw |
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Re: When those words take wing
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:14:25 AM AEST
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another loving romantic write. Very refreshing
Michelle |
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Re: When those words take wing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:43:04 AM AEST
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| Wow a very beautiful romantic poem, I felt the warmth and the love in my heart. Good work. SLipSiX. |
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Re: When those words take wing
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:00:13 AM AEST
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*****We will have to wait and see
Till then it is enough
Just to have you in my arms
Your write shows Important self-awareness with two separate people, yet very connected.
Also..
Your write does perform very appropriate and formative connection, effectively explored
******I know my purpose
It is you
The only love I need to be true
Great job.. terrific, thank you for posting..
RLPoetess ; ))
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