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LET ME TRAVEL HER
Contributed by
Alexander_McDonald
on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Got my toothbrush.
And I'm in a rush.
Got my suitcase.
And my happy-face.
Got my American Express.
And my Visa checks.
Got my nice clothes.
And my paradise nose.
Got my shoes for walking.
And my excuse for talking.
Got my passport photograph.
Now, all I gotta do,
Is export my belly laugh.
Ready to go,
Cross the border.
Out of the country.
Into another land,
Of exotic beauty.
Opening her borders,
From sea to sea.
Open her arms for me.
Let me hold her,
Take in her charms,
Lazily.
Paradise to embrace me,
A place to lose my heart.
I hope she'll keep it safe for me.
While I am there,
Funky tourist shirts,
That's what I'll wear.
They'll laugh 'till it hurts.
But I don't care.
It's one of the perks,
Of being in love,
With the ground at her feet,
And the sky in her hair.
Let me travel her.
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Alexander_McDonald
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2003-01-14 19:00:00]
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Re: LET ME TRAVEL HER
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by mckayla on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 09:05:31 PM AEST
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| This is a wonerful poem. It sounds like you enjoyed writting it!! |
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Re: LET ME TRAVEL HER
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:17:23 AM AEST
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Woo Hoo Alex...if this is true and you go to see her out of the country then when you get back you have to write a sequal of what happened k? ok that's all agreed upon then lmao!!! hehe...i can't help it ima sucker for love...keep writing your hearts desire's my friend....
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Re: LET ME TRAVEL HER
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 10:49:55 PM AEST
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this poem certainly captures vividly the excitement and anticipation of a tourist venturing into where he has never been before.
Enjoyed the personification of the new country, author almost likens it to a (blind) date:
...Into another land, /Of exotic beauty./Opening her borders,/From sea to sea. /Open her arms for me./Let me hold her,
Take in her charms...
and so, further down...
...It's one of the perks, /Of being in love,/With the ground at her feet, /And the sky in her hair. /Let me travel her.
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