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Eternity
Contributed by
angelchick789456
on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:01:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I lie in bed at night and pray,
that you will think of me.
I cry until my eyelids close,
and dream-eternity.
I wake to sunlight on my face,
for a moment I forget.
Then a cloud passes by,
and I realize this is it.
I carry on throughout the day,
feigning joy,and feeling pain.
I long to gaze upon your face,
and share a smile,an embrace.
The day is drawing to an end,
and still I thimk of you.
I try to relax,yet in my mind,
I wonder what to do.
So now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the Lord,my soul to keep.
And should you chance to think of me,
know that I love you-eternally.
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angelchick789456
... [
2005-08-23 01:01:44]
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Re: Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:08:47 AM AEST
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| wow, this is really good! very sad, but written beautifully |
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Re: Eternity
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:51:13 AM AEST
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| A very expressive poem, every well thought out as well, loved it. SLipSiX. |
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Re: Eternity
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:05:24 AM AEST
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great poem!
cheers,
-glass |
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Re: Eternity
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by Archie on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 10:34:01 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. I think this is a great poem to remind a friend to be a friend. I often forget to check in on my poet friends here on the site and see what new poems they have posted an act that I hope I will get a handle on. Thanks for reminding me of what true friendship is all about. |
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Re: Eternity
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:30:35 PM AEST
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NICE POEM BUT DONT THINK TOO MUCH ABOUT THE PAST
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