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Don't Punish me

Contributed by gypsy on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:57:39 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Don't Punish me

U made me notice
I Saw what they couldn't see

I listened for hours
that turned the light on
Gotta glimpse of your heart

Saw a refection of my own
So familiar to me

But you dont see (back-up vox)

Cuz she broke your trust
But I am your friend
Don't punish me

Standin behind u
hoping U will awake

I am more home to U
We want the same

Not just a pacifier
I am salvation

Look at my colors
Come feel the fire


But U won't see (back-up vox)
Cuz
She took your eyes
But I am your friend
Don't punish me

(bridge)

I took your hand
And I felt your colors

A prism that I am
That turned my sences on

Can't U see who I am
My hearts in your hands

And U don't see (back-up vox)

Cuz
She Stained your soul
But a am your friend
Don't punish me
See all that I am

Oh She made U bitter
But I am your friend
Don't punish me

Yeah , she broke your trust,
She took your eyes,
She stained your soul,
She made U bitter,
Come stand beside me,
I am your friend,
Open your arms,
See all that I am
Don't punish me....... Don't punish me

Yeah , she broke your trust,
She took your eyes,
She stained your soul,
She made U bitter,
Come stand beside me,
I am your friend,
Open your arms,
See all that I am
Don't punish me........Don't Punish Me.....Don't Punish You

Gypsy
August 19, 2005




Copyright © gypsy ... [ 2005-08-22 22:57:39]
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Re: Don't Punish me (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:59:45 PM AEST
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So true for many, yet they dont LOOk, like we do.! Good write, and emotional.

Brew~


Re: Don't Punish me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:19:44 PM AEST
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Well written and emotive. It's a thoughtful theme, and so commendable. I don't like the 'u' for 'you', though. It is never a good idea for poetry, as it (I feel) degrades the power of the words.

Andrew


Re: Don't Punish me (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:50:01 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful and full of emotions, that speak to my heart, great job..

tasha


Re: Don't Punish me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:02:28 AM AEST
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Mm a beautiful poem, packed with many emotions and feelings. SLipSiX.




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