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America Onlife
Contributed by
KiLin
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:51:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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So here I sit, surfing nightly
all I see, tempts me slightly
click right here to get your member
bigger than your thin and slender
are you lonely there tonight?
come with me and love we might
addicted gambler touch the banner
pick the one in winning manner
concerning women,smaller bust
touch the mouse, a social must
maybe one day we might find
some piece of heaven, peace of mind
but pushing mice and buttons softly
only help the high and lofty
and all our selfish, harmful clicking
while the a.m. hand is ticking
only harms our lonely souls
a mighty price, a hefty toll
so six six six will buy your life
every month, a foreign wife
find your match this page will prove
but add your number, pay your dues
but just remember while your surfing
that there are sharks, swimming, lurking
and all you think there is, is not
and all you see, is all you've got
Copyright ©
KiLin
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2005-08-22 22:51:25]
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Re: America Onlife
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:36:43 AM AEST
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| So true so true! Very good write! |
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Re: America Onlife
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:19:09 AM AEST
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now this is sound. a grand poem nicely written and sage words throughout . How true indeed!
Michelle |
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Re: America Onlife
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:54:42 PM AEST
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| Hm a very interesting poem, most of this poem reminded me alot of what my dad did, well, he went to thailand and bought a bride for five thousand, and now he is saying that they're not going to last any longer, ironic isnt it. slipsix. |
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