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why do i feel like this?!?
Contributed by
68birdls1
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:08:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you were my one and only desire,
my love for you couldnt take me much higher.
but you didnt care,
and just let it float away in the air.
it really heart me bad,
i never knew we had what we had.
a love that was so true,
i cant believe that i didnt have a clue!
for the longest time all i wanted was you,
but that was when i was down and feeling blue.
that was thing and this is now,
i dont care any how.
or atleast i say i dont, but i really do,
so to my heart i must be true.
i do still love you there is no doubt,
you are the only girl that i have ever really cared about.
it is so hard to move on,
and when i try it just feels so wrong.
why do i feel this way ohh why...
just to forget about you is somethng that i so do try!
but i cant, so here i am,
writing these poems, so you can know where i am
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Re: why do i feel like this?!?
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by Sahara on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:20:35 PM AEST
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Great write, you probably are still inlove or just going threw the phases of grieving.
Best advice if any I can offer is to let it all out so you don't keep it bottled up inside.
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Re: why do i feel like this?!?
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by 68birdls1 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:42:38 PM AEST
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| well thanks alot, but i dont want to tell her due to the fear of being rejected... but thanks for your advice, one day i may actually act upon it |
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Re: why do i feel like this?!?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 03:14:58 AM AEST
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| Oh wow, I can definately relate to this, it feel the exact situation i'm in now. SLipSiX. Good write. |
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