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Looks can be Deceiving
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:55:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I am scared of me;
of what I have become,
though I look happy
looks can be decieving.
Cant you see Im broken?
Just a broken child.
I say I need a hug,
but that only works for a little while.
I need you at my side
forever and for always,
youd be the first to stand by me.
through my thickest pains.
People only see a happy little girl,
but if they looked inside;
theyd see a different world.
Theyd see the scars
across my arms
across my theighs
and through my heart.
Theyd see Im not truly
a happy little girl.
I hide my sadness
with a smile.
Looks can be decieving.
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Re: Looks can be Deceiving
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by brew on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:58:30 PM AEST
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Its not what is on the out , yet its in the inner.! Become happy with YOU............good post, and I hope all becomes, clearer
brew~ |
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Re: Looks can be Deceiving
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:05:32 PM AEST
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I know the feeling... I hope things get better for you. You sound a lot like a friend of mine.
Anyways, Nice write its really good. The emotions are displayed quite well. You take the reader through a couple twists and turns.
Good write.
~Dawn |
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Re: Looks can be Deceiving
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:16:00 PM AEST
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Very deep and powerful write....You have expressed your emotions really well...
Keep it up..
Jenni |
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Re: Looks can be Deceiving
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by THEL0STDREAMER on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:50:57 PM AEST
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This is very true that people can seem super happy but that's not who they are. It can also be the other way around; people can seem sad and depressed when they're not. Good write
---~ Larisa |
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Re: Looks can be Deceiving
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by KiLin on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:02:30 PM AEST
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| I have felt that exact same way before. but it's always important not to be scared, b/c everything you are is just what you are supposed to be. Everything you think, everything you want, and everything you do is everything that make you, you. Such is life, and I enjoyed your poem. |
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Re: Looks can be Deceiving
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by Flyinglow on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 01:45:10 AM AEST
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| Yeah, this write is great, partly because i do the same. The only place i actually show my true feelings are in my blog, and on here |
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Re: Looks can be Deceiving
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:27:01 PM AEST
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wow... amazing write. a lot of us are like this... i am an example. you hide the true, frowing person on the inside with a smile. truely amazing write. you wrote it well, keep up the good work!
and all tho it may not do much, i send hugs and lots of luck! take care.
~sprints |
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