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dont understand
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:24:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Dont call me stupid
just cause you dont understand
Dont say I shouldnt do this
you just dont understand
You say Im rash
and making a bad choice
but you dont understand
This is a addication
I cant just stop
you dont think I havent tried?
You say Im throwing my life away
that oneday Ill go to far
But I dont care
you just dont understand
This is my release
You dont see me critizing you
so leave me alone
you just dont understand
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2005-08-22 21:24:39]
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Re: dont understand
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:44:08 PM AEST
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this poem is very dismissive....and i can sense an underlying feeling of hopelessness....
strong write i think..............if this is based on true life maybe you should try and listen to these people...im sure they only want whats best for you! |
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Re: dont understand
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st September 2005 @ 07:27:29 PM AEST
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| well I hope you nfell better now you told them,,good write from a good writer,,, |
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