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Horizontal Tears
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Here I am lying on the floor
The tears fall all the more
Hands grow tired from clenching the knife
Pressed against my throat to end my life
Horizontal stains streak from my eyes
As I lie on the ground facing the skies
The stars remind me of how I’d wish at night
Praying and hoping things would be all right
Poor senseless wishes, true never to be
Tears now outline the shadow of me
My eyes now cloud and life is a blur
On the road to oblivion but I wish I’d be sure
Look in the mirror at my teary reflection
Misery and pain in all my detection
Crying silently when I can’t sleep
Horizontal tears stream down my cheeks
So I wipe my eyes and close them tight
Shut in the darkness, block out the light
Burning trails run to my temples from eyes
So happen the tears as I lie down and cry
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:31:16 PM AEST
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| wow thats a really good poem...i used to feel like nothing in this world would ever make me happy but sometimes you just have to push thru...keep it up!! |
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:46:30 PM AEST
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very descriptive poem.....and sad....
i get like this sometimes.....but ya know what the light is stronger than the darkness!!! |
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:52:47 PM AEST
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I really like this poem
The imagery is outsanding
The emotion is amazing
Great write :)
~Dawn |
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by Shattered_soul on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:07:33 PM AEST
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Your writing is really well outlined and talks about everyone it seems, but this is very good and everything turns out right in the end, even if the begining is most painful.
S.S |
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:20:06 PM AEST
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Amazing write, Jennie... You are so very talented...and have so much to give to this world....
Hope all is well..
Jenni |
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by poisonpen00ad on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:34:57 PM AEST
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| Very strong and great write. I enjoyed it very much. |
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 12:28:50 AM AEST
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thats really sad and the title was very interesting i just had to read |
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Re: Horizontal Tears
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:04:40 PM AEST
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A tragic powerful sad write. You've poured yourself amazingly in this piece.
Thanks for sharing.
Jane~ |
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