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Tragedy in the Sky
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 08:56:36 PM in AEST
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Treacherous, black sky
Merciless and unafraid
Seized too many lives
A tragedy did outplay
A tragedy so unbearable
Every living soul did die
Like a doom-fated meteor
All fell from the sky
If I had the given chance
I would take anyone’s seat
Die instead of you
Husband and wife,
Unlived future, united as one in heart
Together at the very end
Now death do you part
Brother and sister,
Quarreling with each other again
Never thought this is where it all ends
On this cold and dreary plane
Little child,
I’m sure your mother held your hand
While you’re small heart came to a halt
Before you crashed upon the land
Teenage lovers,
So passionate, youthful vigour to give
Half-quenched the taste of love
Even though you will not live
Never thought by stepping onto this plane
You’d be robbed of the light of day
So many plans, hopes and dreams
For each of your souls we pray
Was there silence
Or did you shout?
I hope you weren’t too scared
When the lights went out
Almighty God we really need you now
Copyright ©
pUnKa_RaCh
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2005-08-22 20:56:36]
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:05:55 PM AEST
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shocking
a stab to the heart really
i loved the words used
and the way you expressed it was
beautiful
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by helzwar007 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:07:14 PM AEST
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| This was a good poem -sa-sa-00ga-b00ga- |
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:28:57 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful.... this is so sad....
Great tribute...
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:19:39 PM AEST
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This is gallant a brilliant and compassionate peice of writting, u r 1 hell of a writter just thought i 'd add that ,bout time don't u think, in
a world, Beautiful . . .
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by poisonpen00ad on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 11:53:04 PM AEST
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This was just awesome. Just brilliant. I'm at a loss for words....
Your fan,
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:02:18 PM AEST
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This was too seet for words. What a sentimetal write.
Thanks for sharing tihs.
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:30:36 PM AEST
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you know, even if I never step into a plane, I have not in 2 years, each time my husband goes to work, I always kiss and hug him so much. I always say I will see you at such and such a time.
His answer is always, see you when I return.. that he is not going anywhere..
You just do not know when the time is that God will come to get you.
I guess that is why we all say, be prepared.. for you do not know when He will come.
This write is so sad. I don't even want to imagine what took place as the plane was going down.
*****Treacherous, black sky
Merciless and unafraid
The skies have no fear is correct.
Your write certainly builds to a crescendo of emphasis to the end, very dramatic all the way. A sadly stressful write, brings lots of tears..
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: Tragedy in the Sky
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 08:35:06 AM AEST
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so sad... such a wonderfully written dedication......
hugs n' love nessa
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