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SOMETIMES
Contributed by
Alexander_McDonald
on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 06:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I've seen love,
Turn into hate,
Too many times.
I've seen people,
That don't communicate,
Committing horrible crimes.
Sometimes,
Cold is hot.
Sometimes,
I'm not,
Too warm.
Sometimes,
Jack Frost,
Has a grip on my soul.
Sometimes,
I feel tossed,
My heart ripped,
From this empty hole.
Sometimes,
I feel so hardened,
It's not too nice.
Sometimes,
I feel like a block of concrete.
Sometimes,
I just wish to be,
Pardoned,
From my prison of ice.
Sometimes,
I want to feel the heat.
Sometimes,
I wonder,
How much longer,
Can my heart,
Stay alive,
From this frostbite?
Sometimes,
I wonder,
How much longer,
Can I survive,
Being alone every night.
Copyright ©
Alexander_McDonald
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2003-01-14 18:20:00]
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Re: SOMETIMES
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 08:25:41 PM AEST
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.. This poem sort of touched me becasue there are ALOT of times when i feel like this and it sucks, you did a good job at telling it like it is..
Mit Liebe und Umarmungen
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Re: SOMETIMES
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:10:03 AM AEST
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Oh my friend it's been a while since you've posted....this is so beautifully written and so true many of us have felt this way at some point or another ...it's very painful and very cold...thank you for sharing this one Alex....you keep em' coming....
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