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Crazy love
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:20:02 PM in AEST
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Spoken words of what could have been; silence of that, which was… illusions and dreams; a crazy love. Immortal flame or ashes of the night, holding on to what never was… My faith in love pulled me through; hoping for so much more… It was my guiding light; it was dark no more. I was a believer; drowning in tears… drunk with love. Spoken words of what could have been; silence of that, which was… illusions and dreams; a crazy love. I have come to realize; it was a one way street… You never cared for me. My love was true… worthy of more; it just wasn’t meant to be. No use to settle the score. I’m picking up the pieces, moving on to a distant shore… It was just a crazy love. Tomorrow is a new day…a new sun. I am a believer, and will carry on...will not fall. It’s not much, but after all… more than I’ve had.
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Re: Crazy love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 08:08:03 PM AEST
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Very Nice write..
When we suddenly wake up and see that we are bring fourth more than we have too or need too for love...
we see its for all the wrong reasons...
Keep believing...
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Crazy love
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:23:42 PM AEST
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Great poem...............i admit your words did stike a few chords in my heart....
i can very much relate to your feelings of love....only to turn around and realise everything they said and did meant nothing....talk about ripping your heart out
anyway this was a well written piece of poetry, liked the rhyme style....and I'm glad you are still keeping hope.....well done for being strong! |
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Re: Crazy love
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by brew on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:39:21 PM AEST
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You can carry on and will..........know you are worth more.! Good post.!
Brew~! |
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Re: Crazy love
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:45:52 PM AEST
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| great write, i know exactly how you feel, keep it up |
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