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Like Romeo & Juliet
Contributed by
living_dead_girl
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:47:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I'm not going to make it
I can't hold on any longer
I can feel the blood surrounding me
I can see your body laying next to me
Like Romeo & Juliet
We ended our life to be together
Forever in the great unknown
I see the pearly gates ahead
You're waiting for me just outside
Saying I can make it
I can get free
Free fron those who forbid our love
Free from those who judged & harassed us
You took my hand & we walked in together
No, I didn't live through the tragic night
But at least now I have my love
To hold for eternity
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2005-08-22 18:47:24]
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Re: Like Romeo & Juliet
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:51:28 PM AEST
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| very deep and romanitc in that tragic romeo and juliet way.. I like it and know where you are coming from. good write |
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Re: Like Romeo & Juliet
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:52:19 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. I loved it all but especially the end where you wrote - Free from those who forbid our love
Free from those who judged & harassed us
Great write!
peace and hugs, john
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Re: Like Romeo & Juliet
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:34:17 PM AEST
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tragic poem indeed....but a real gem...
Great to read, excellent! |
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