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My heart bleeds...
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:41:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I bleed your name deep inside
Where the rest of my feelings hide
My heart cries out to you
So loud it goes right through
But you see or hear
I wish it was more clear
So you could just see
Just understand me
You look my wat
I smile, The you look away
Whats so wrong with me?
When you see me, what do you see?
You dont care about my feeling
My heart is not even close to healing
They hide
Deep inside
You seduce me and you dont even try
I try my best,still I dont know why
My heart bleeds
Because your all it wants and needs
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sick_n_twisted
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2005-08-22 13:41:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My heart bleeds...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 02:39:08 PM AEST (User
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i really like your poem...i no where its coming from..keep it up!!! |
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Re: My heart bleeds...
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:13:33 PM AEST (User
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this is desperation in it's most naked form a
plea or cry in the night, magnificent the way u express your hoplessness, very mature in it's
writting and relentless in it's quest 4 answers
very interesting peice . . .
Ben |
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Re: My heart bleeds...
(User Rating: 1 ) by angel_eyes70 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:14:42 PM AEST (User
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Good Poem Dee!!
xxxKimxx |
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