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HAUNTED HOUSE
Contributed by
chazthepoet
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:31:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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HAUNTED HOUSE
Spiders crept, spirits wept,
Devils chant, humans can't
Hark the sound
Or sight the view
Of the emperor of deja-vu.
Demons prowl, creatures foul,
Walls and floors, secrets doors
That contain
Things which untold
Of mysteries deep and dark and cold.
Windows blind, rest defined,
Carpets old, footprints bold
Which belong
To beings blue
Who cannot be seen or touched or moved.
Copyright ©
chazthepoet
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2005-08-22 13:31:42]
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Re: HAUNTED HOUSE
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by sick_n_twisted on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:44:14 PM AEST
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| mann this poem is awesome theres such a good flow and the rhymes the rhymes are so cool...they actually rhyme haha great write ! |
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Re: HAUNTED HOUSE
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by starry_eyed_soul on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 02:33:53 PM AEST
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i really like this... you did a great job on it... keep it up...
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Re: HAUNTED HOUSE
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 02:26:30 PM AEST
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I can understand your point of view in this poem very well. This is good.
You have a great knack for simplicity. |
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Re: HAUNTED HOUSE
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by Errious on
Thursday, 7th December 2006 @ 12:15:27 PM AEST
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Flows really well. I like your style of writing in limericks. very contraversial. Cool.
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