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Punishment
Contributed by
anitajames
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:10:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I got rid of him, I was scared
of what happened before.
Knowing that heaven would forever close the door.
Without him I was able to gain my life's dream,
Never to be happy again it would seem.
My life would be different,
My family complete.
I guess heaven and hell will just have to compete.
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anitajames
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2005-08-22 10:10:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Punishment
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 05:07:31 AM AEST (User
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I really like the last line. Well done.
Take care.
David |
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