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A SHORT ROMANCE.
Contributed by
lillyjane
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:14:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I was feeling bored, so went out with me mate,
went to a well known night club, called the figure eight,
over in the corner, stood a really handsome guy,
I could see quite clearly, he was giving me the eye.
He came striding over, said, would you like to dance?
grabbed me round the waist, I didn't stand a chance,
then he walked me home, kissed me on the lips,
thought I was exsperienced, but he gave me some tips.
There was no happy ending,it ended in a short while,
he was handsome, exotic, erotic, but also an exile,
after a good night out, a cab he tried to hail,
a copper appeared from nowhere, and carted him of to jail.
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2005-08-22 07:14:30]
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by Archie on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:26:24 AM AEST
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| Ow! I guess that is the way life goes sometimes. Atleast you had a great time. Great write. |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:50:51 PM AEST
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Oh LillyJane, how hilarious. Sounds like my kinda luck, lol. Find something you think is wonderful and 'poof' they turn into fool's gold.
Funny, funny write.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by Dorrian_Malcavalia on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 04:07:36 PM AEST
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| I would say this is an alright poem but you should not always ryme, its so common, but over all I give this poen a three. |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by sad_little_shard on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 11:25:39 AM AEST
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| nice poem |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by ANK_1321_ERW on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 08:28:42 PM AEST
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| wow, that is different. i like it. it makes a lot of sense in ways most poems don't. It's cute. Keep it up. |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by MsCrys on
Wednesday, 5th July 2006 @ 07:54:15 PM AEST
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| Sad, but interesting. I can't wait to read more of your work! |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by jono on
Saturday, 22nd July 2006 @ 05:29:50 AM AEST
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| I've had the shortest romance who can beet this I saw a girl then when someone found out She dumpped me. 10 minutes it lasted I must be a loser |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 05:34:52 PM AEST
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| awww.. |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 04:29:29 PM AEST
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| Thats really too bad! nice poem though |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by ponginas on
Saturday, 16th August 2008 @ 11:33:56 AM AEST
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| haha..good poem..funny..i liked it.. |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by 3660Days on
Wednesday, 24th December 2008 @ 06:54:42 AM AEST
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| LOL nice |
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Re: A SHORT ROMANCE.
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by ProfessorReason on
Tuesday, 7th September 2010 @ 07:00:19 AM AEST
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| That is just a rightous little thought! thank you for the smile that just crossed my lips! Isn't love grand? |
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