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Life
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:30:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Life is like a whisper
A lucky slice to be found
A closed curtain hiding so many secrets
A gloomy lament
A burning, consuming fever
A cry in a tired dream
A mantle of worn-out illusion
A to forget remembering
A dangling pain
An unlocked key
For me
Copyright ©2005 Fernanda F. Rocha
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Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-08-22 06:30:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Life
(User Rating: 1 ) by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 07:00:28 AM AEST (User
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a good write, great use of metaphors |
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