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un named
Contributed by
guiltycircles
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:46:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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please leave me where you found me
in my world of silence,
there is no prize
for making peace through violence
there is no time for martyrs
in a world of hate and greed
but still you will try
no way in hell you can succeed
kill the lights
so you don't have to see
the bloody murder
happening to me
it's a suicidal homicide
sending me out of mind
your sight blinds my heart
this pain is one of a kind
Copyright ©
guiltycircles
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2005-08-22 03:46:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: un named
(User Rating: 1 ) by JenJen on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:20:13 AM AEST (User
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this was a very nice emotional poem, and if you asked me for a title i would say....Unwanted Death or A Terrorist Attacks
All my love, hope and hugges
Jenny
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Re: un named
(User Rating: 1 ) by sick_n_twisted on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:57:44 PM AEST (User
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nice poem love the flow ! seriously emotional poem...sorry if you feel like that...but nice poem i really like this one...
Dee, |
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Re: un named
(User Rating: 1 ) by SensitiveSoAbused on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 06:04:40 PM AEST (User
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kill the lights
so you don't have to see
the bloody murder
happening to me
i love this line...
this poem gnaws at my gut and flashes me right back to the corner of my dungeon where i lie hunched naked in the fetal position.
I would call it Suicidal Homicide.
And hey... you never replied to my last pm...
-SensitiveSoAbused |
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Re: un named
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 04:31:11 AM AEST (User
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I really like this, especially the las verse. Nice work. |
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