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Two Poems
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Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:40:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If I where
If I were a poem that every one loved
You would be my words
If I were a song that could make every one smile
You would be my chorus
If I were a painting that made people think
You would be my colors
If I were a shooting star and some one made a wish
You would be that wish
If I were a prayer that some one made every night
You would be the miracle
If I am special or handsome in any way it is only
Because I have you
You are everything that is beautiful in side of me
You are my whole world
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2005-08-22 01:40:34]
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Re: Two Poems
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 02:03:16 AM AEST
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One there's nothing wrong with these poems and two why are u depressed?
Talk to me.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Two Poems
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by BloodyTears5 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 02:32:40 AM AEST
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i love both these poems they dont sucks they are very well written.
im depressed too dont let it get you down.
if you wanna talk im always welcome to listen..
~Sarah |
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Re: Two Poems
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by Gothchyk on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:03:39 AM AEST
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If I were everything to you that you are to me
I would be so more than happy
If I were some one that you could be with
Then I would be so for all eternity
But I just can’t see anything in me
That is worth being
If only I could be
You are john, and you know it, These poems are so beautiful, keep your head up and a smile on your face,please, *puppy dog eyes*, amazing writes, again they have left me speechless as most of poems do,muaw. |
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Re: Two Poems
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 05:43:28 AM AEST
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Lovely Poems, very well writen.
Good work |
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Re: Two Poems
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:05:15 AM AEST
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Dear Doriens_Picture:
You are much more than you know.. you have delighted and pleased our hearts with your write..
We readers will be everything for and to you.. and that makes you everything..
A most beautiful write.. filled with so much love and beauty.. I thank God that He placed you in our world.
Raquel Leah Poetess ; )) |
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Re: Two Poems
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 05:16:36 AM AEST
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| You can break that rule? lmao how? I wanna know. None the less good poem, much like the rest of your writting much appreciated for posting keep it up cant wait for more. |
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