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The Next Day
Contributed by
Shnannon
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:29:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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One day a friend
The next day he's more.
One day one of the crowd
The next day he's the only one you're looking for.
One day just a guy
The next day he's themost important guy in your world.
One day blending in
The next day he's standing out.
One day ignored
The next day he's your world.
And you?
One day his friend
The next day...
Still just his friend.
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-08-22 01:29:29]
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Re: The Next Day
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:35:58 AM AEST
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i like it.........i like the transformation in the poem and the start was especially lovely to read....
unhappy ending.....but mainly the truth
good job! |
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Re: The Next Day
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 03:20:12 AM AEST
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Very well written.
good job.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Next Day
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by guiltycircles on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:59:50 AM AEST
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| this heart breaking feeling is so well expressed in this write, well done!!!! |
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Re: The Next Day
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by PumpkinPie on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 10:22:08 PM AEST
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Nicely written ! A crush can give you immense vitality,but literally tear you down when the only one living it is you.
PumpkinPie |
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Re: The Next Day
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by NoangelNohope on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 07:23:41 PM AEST
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| great irony =) |
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