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Rain....
Contributed by
Calliope
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Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:04:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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No its not love..
Its rain...
falling down upon my head
washing the tears from my eyes
But the tears keep coming
And the rain will end soon
And in the end
I will still have a broken heart......
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Calliope
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Re: Rain....
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by THORN on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:17:04 AM AEST
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That was fantastic, I loved the symbolism...!
Good Luck, sorry to know you feel this way... Good things come to those who wait, believe.. Just believe...
Keep that ink flowing! 5 star write!
Cheers,
-xXRayeXx |
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Re: Rain....
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by Shnannon on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:33:41 AM AEST
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great symbolism. i love the tears and the rain...
a broken heart isn't so easy to deal with. i hate getting through things and then still being left with a broken heart. it sucks
anyway, keep up the good work |
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Re: Rain....
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:43:36 AM AEST
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short write..........but poweful words that stike the heart...
i like simplicity and this poem was a marvel to read....emotive and honest.........well done
I hope your pain ends soon |
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Re: Rain....
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by JenJen on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 04:31:52 PM AEST
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your poems are short but sweet and to the point! i really like thsoe types of poems!
well done keep it up
all my love hope and hugges
jenny
xxx
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Re: Rain....
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 05:26:52 PM AEST
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Your poem reminds me of a song about this very same subject.
"Day in day out my tear strained face
is pressed against the window pain
my eyes search the sky desparately for rain
cause raindrops will hide my teardrops
and no one will ever know that I'm crying
when I go outside
To the world outside my tears I refuse to explain
How I wish that it would rain"
Quote from "I wish it would rain" by The Temptations |
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Re: Rain....
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:12:02 PM AEST
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| Short, but meaningful, good write |
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Re: Rain....
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by remote on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 03:11:20 PM AEST
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| Nice, sad, short and honest. |
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Re: Rain....
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 13th July 2006 @ 07:38:51 PM AEST
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I like I said before, I really like this one. It's very good. Maybe you can't draw to save your life, but you can write.
Take care.
David |
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