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Lived without you..''
Contributed by
Kingsman
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:56:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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"Lived without you.."
This lonely night has my thoughts with sorrow
These regrets are heavy with fear of tomarrow
I feel a sense of loss, I wish it was different
I could explain my actions, if only you'll listen
I'll better my wrongs, and start correcting mistakes
Regreting to say, I was always there for you
Now I'm swept in the waves, I want to howl and cry
With hope that you'll hear me, before I'm found in the tide
Now I'll deny that I ever lived without you..
Copyright ©
Kingsman
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2005-08-22 00:56:52]
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Re: Lived without you..''
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:58:14 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: Lived without you..''
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by Shnannon on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:23:07 AM AEST
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I really like the ling "These regrets are heavy with fear of tomorrow." it's a very powerful line to me. great job
keep up the good work |
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Re: Lived without you..''
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:05:23 AM AEST
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| Nice poem and good write. |
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Re: Lived without you..''
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by Kingsman on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 02:16:24 PM AEST
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| Thanks ;) |
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