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Too scared to die
Contributed by
Flyinglow
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:45:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Too sad to live
Too scared to die
Dreams full of fears
and days full of lies
Lots of work to do
But I haven’t started
How can I write?
When I’m detached, departed?
Cant sleep all night
Too scared of death
Will it be later?
Or choke on the next breath?
I think that i'm drowning
But I know that i’m falling
Just sittin' at home
No one comes a’ calling
I’ve been dead for 3 years now
From pain deep inside
Will it get stronger?
Or will it subside?
Why must this continue?
Every night, every day
You really don’t love me
Despite what you say
Your heads full of lies
And so are your words
Forgive and forget
That’s just for the birds
Maybe later you'll learn
But you probably won’t
You never get close
Who wants that, I don’t
Copyright ©
Flyinglow
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2005-08-22 00:45:14]
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Re: Too scared to die
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shnannon on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:26:29 AM AEST
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wow, i really love this
i got goosebumps reading it
it feels like you climbed inside my head and scooped out what i was thinking and wrote it down
amazing job! |
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Re: Too scared to die
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by Darkhorse71 on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 04:47:50 AM AEST
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Worded great and very catchy, a lot of truths are stated in there. Definetly a 5!!
Peace, john |
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Re: Too scared to die
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by Shattered_soul on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 06:29:58 AM AEST
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JUST MY INSIGHT!
it seems like you work hard to find rhyming words, I dont know if you knowticed in my poems but they rarly rhym, I just wanted to say that you dont always have to rhym your words for it to be poetry.
Good job and every poem that you creat will be better then your last.
S.S |
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