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tOwELs anD sMoKes
Contributed by
graci
on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:01:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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hazy eyes
shattered dreams
sensous lips
and undying screams.
raging emotions
broken hopes
distorted images
all out of scope.
unstoppable feelings
flaming desires
senseless whispers
no more cries.
it's all been written
it's destined
the silent witness?
smokes and towels
then the wedding bell rings.
Copyright ©
graci
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2005-08-22 00:01:03]
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Re: tOwELs anD sMoKes
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:44:33 AM AEST
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Very good write...i really liked this stanza
unstoppable feelings
flaming desires
senseless whispers
no more cries.
(Just a thought....if you want more comments on your works comment on other peoples remember 3 comments for every poem posted) |
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Re: tOwELs anD sMoKes
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 06:10:43 AM AEST
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| Good Poem and good writing :) |
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Re: tOwELs anD sMoKes
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by secretwind on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 03:35:26 PM AEST
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| Nice twisted flow...I like it. |
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Re: tOwELs anD sMoKes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 07:00:31 PM AEST
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| Interesting assumption. nice write.. Raquel Leah |
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