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Vanquished Love
Contributed by
darkhorse71
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 08:15:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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How can it be that a love so deep
can hurt two hearts and make them weep?
To share our lives was meant to be,
and I know that You agree
our hearts were made for each other.
My life without You is so wrong,
I need You back where You belong -
holding hearts and holding hands,
fulfilling each other’s love demands.
My heart lives only for You.
There is no life after a love so strong;
I'll always wonder where we went wrong.
Lying beside You and holding You tight
made everything wrong in the world seem right.
It's You, and only You, I need.
I know You're hurt and I know You're sad;
and even the angels above are mad
about the way You've been abused.
Honey You know you'll never be used
by me You're heart is safe.
When I made a commitment to Your heart
I vowed my love would never part.
I think about You in all that I do,
hoping that all of my dreams come true.
You're what my dreams are made of.
Darkhorse 71
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darkhorse71
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2005-08-21 20:15:49]
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Re: Vanquished Love
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by ButchCorpuz on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 08:19:10 PM AEST
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Very good poem! It's true that we can't control
love, it's the most unpredictable force in the
entire universe.
Keep writing!
-Butch
-The Betrayer of Hope |
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Re: Vanquished Love
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by EmoDCgirl36 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:15:10 PM AEST
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| Yes quite right. It's just what we need though. A little bit of a surprise never hurt anyone. This poem I think everyone should read because they will feel connected to it somehow. Maybe not for the love. But for the feelings that are read between the lines. I hope the best for you. |
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Re: Vanquished Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:15:25 PM AEST
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Wonderful Write John
such a sweet soul you have.. You deserve the very best
I hope your dream comes true..
Hugggggggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: Vanquished Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 27th August 2005 @ 10:54:47 PM AEST
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| I've read pretty much everyone of your poems, and everyone of them I love, there all so relatable, heartfelt, you're an excellent writter, good luck, and don't stop. |
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