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Your candle is still burning bright
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:30:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The day you left… I closed that chapter of my life. I just wanted to forget, but little did I know… My love for you grew stronger and stronger; you stayed on for so much longer… living on within my heart. No one said it would be easy, and the burning heartache… the toughest part. It wouldn’t leave me alone. You kept me awake at night… couldn’t call my dreams my own. It’s been days…months gone by, and your candle’s still burning bright… The day you left… I closed that chapter of my life. I just wanted to forget, but little did I know… my love for you would grow.
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Re: Your candle is still burning bright
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by brew on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:37:35 PM AEST
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That is so true, yet we need sometime, to move on from the hurt.! Beautifully penned write. thanks for sharing......
Brew~ |
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Re: Your candle is still burning bright
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by somedaylove on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:25:32 PM AEST
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| Great write.......... I think in life we take to many things for granted, we don't really relize how much we love someone untll they have gone away.......... |
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Re: Your candle is still burning bright
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:15:55 AM AEST
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This is a great write. I know the feeling of
unwanted irony in life. It's ironic that when
the person that we love leaves us, that's the
time when we learn to love them the most.
Keep writing!
-Butch
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Re: Your candle is still burning bright
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by Shnyzz on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 09:51:38 PM AEST
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| this should not be on the least read |
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