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What The Hell is Going On in Here
Contributed by
mangos
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 05:22:14 PM in AEST
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It would be in my best interest to simply walk away
I would be a fool if I allowed you to smile and stay
There are reasons why things fall into the places they do
Come closer and I can show exactly where I fell too
Messages in bottles that sink when tossed among the fish
A cosmic collision when your shooting star crashes right after the wish
Hampering the progress of a mutual satisfactory resolution
One half of my mind struggles with its counterpart to dispel its delusion
Make notice of the hanging clock which ticks two seconds at a time
Life has been cut in half, to equal segments, one death the other sublime
In all seriousness I remind you that this is real life not a dream world
In all fairness I beg you to recall your last and final words
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2005-08-21 17:22:14]
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Re: What The Hell is Going On in Here
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:51:52 PM AEST
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Wow, this reminds me of one of my earlier, soul-sucking, I'll-take-you-down-with-me writes...Thanks for the memories!
I'm glad I'm over that selfish stupidity now. Nice write btw.
Scorp.
(Happily staying in her dream world, because reality bites!) |
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Re: What The Hell is Going On in Here
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by Archie on
Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 06:42:47 PM AEST
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| Well, It is better than the other 2 I read so I will leave my comment here saying: You got guts kid, You got guts! |
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