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Cast of Shadows
Contributed by
his_3_nails
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 05:03:30 PM in AEST
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Cast of Shadow
Yea, as I walk through the valley of the shadows of death...
I will fear no evil; Therefore I am.
Darkness around me looms,
slowly everything it consumes.
Evil thoughts cloud my mind,
as hatred overwhelms mankind.
I walk down the steet, on the open run,
as they pass by, counting the shadows one by one
Still I wake to another day,
praying for the pain to go away.
GO AWAY........
please don/'/t stay
LEAVE ME BE
no longer do I wish to see
NO MORE HATE
why cant I excape
I WANT TO BE FREE
why cant I just be me
Never once asked of this,
Just another one on Lucifer/'/s list.
I carry the tormented load,
making my sanity to erode.
As I walk down the darkened road,
I realise for all my life there never was bliss.
Dont know if I can keep going,
God/'/s answers arent showing.
I just wish the pain to....
GO AWAY!
Suicidal thought, withot pitty,
all when I roam this empty city.
No one but myself.......
Lost to everyone else.
This is my hidden fury,
making life seen contradictory.
How I/'/ve felt,
no ones ever known.
My pain; the only thing shown.
no matter what, nothing has helped.
These are the shadows in which I roam
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Re: Cast of Shadows
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by brew on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 06:23:38 PM AEST
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Lots of shadows, and dark in this particular write.! Well penned.!
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Re: Cast of Shadows
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 10:11:35 PM AEST
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well, Brandon, this was a great write! i loved it. of course, i am from the shadows myself. i know the pain. just please realize that there are many in the shadows and just call out my name- i'll find you! well written poem, i truely enjoyed reading this one. well done, keep up the good work!
take care of yourself, i send lots of luck to you, hoping all will turn out all right for you
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Re: Cast of Shadows
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 01:13:40 AM AEST
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i like this alot and it is something i can relate to....excellent job..
Lots of love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Cast of Shadows
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 10:31:07 AM AEST
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I can see that you know the scriptures so I hope you don't mind if I share one that I think is a good answer to this poem.
"My grace is sufficient for you for my power is made perfect in weakness" 2 corinthians 12:9b
This poem is great because it reveals that you atleats want an answer for why you are struggling. This is a partial answer. I hate to struggle to but unless we go through the fire we will never overcome our charecters. |
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