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because of you
Contributed by
nannerz
on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:23:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What did you do?
I have changed because of you
I have found parts of me
I thought lost forever
I look in the mirror
and see a smiling happy girl
a face I haven't seen in a long while
I blame you
for doing this to me
My heart now feels full
and does a double skip when you are near
your smile makes my day
you have changed me
now I ask you a favor
not a big one
but please
dont leave me
I dont think I could take it
you give me reason to wake up
with out you
I would become
that scary suicidal girl
Please dont hurt me
I have givin you my heart
treat it with care
Copyright ©
nannerz
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2005-08-21 16:23:26]
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Re: because of you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 05:00:23 PM AEST
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Very lovely write..
To be in love is a wonderful feeling hold on to it.
Hope your heart is held with the love and affection you need to stay that smiling girl.
Write on..Hugggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: because of you
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:22:15 AM AEST
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Good poem! It's great that you took the risk of
being hurt just so you could embrace love.
Keep writing!
-Butch
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