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To the one who has forgotten
Contributed by
AshRayne
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 04:04:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A simple ring,
And I run to seek the answer.
To hear a voice I cannot remember.
To the one who has forgotten,
Please remember me.
Don’t forget what we shared.
My voice you should know by heart,
‘Tis one you have heard for so long,
Oh, it’s been so long.
To the one who has forgotten,
Please say you jest.
Don’t hurt me yet again.
All my hopes, and dreams.
Do not waste upon a mind that is weak.
If one cannot remember one’s own daughter.
To the one who has forgotten,
Do I mean so little?
Answer what my heart radiates!
I know you can hear it!
You, who have been so close for so long.
Please say you remember.
Copyright ©
AshRayne
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2005-08-21 16:04:13]
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Re: To the one who has forgotten
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 09:43:35 AM AEST
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An emotional poem of longing and heartache
nicely written and expressed, as for the out
come, no comment, well done . . .
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Re: To the one who has forgotten
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 23rd August 2005 @ 11:15:57 AM AEST
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| As a father, heart breaking for me. Beautifully written. |
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