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How Do You Help A Friend In Need?
Contributed by
darkhorse71
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Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:28:37 PM in AEST
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How do you help a friend in need?
How do you help a friend indeed.
You can talk, you can pray, you can hope, it’s true,
but nothing you try can chase the blues.
You can offer hugs and to hold her tight,
you can offer a shoulder to cry on at night.
But when this friend is a world away
nothing much matters to change her day.
I know exactly how she feels,
for I walked in her shoes back a few years.
the hurt and the pain, the anger and wrath;
the need for release in a red tinged bath.
But kiddo’s and mum’s, and all of the rest
make her put forth her very false best.
I honestly pray with all of my heart
They will be enough to make a new start.
Darkhorse 71
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darkhorse71
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Re: How Do You Help A Friend In Need?
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by somedaylove on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:35:26 PM AEST
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| Wow I can so relate to this......never give up hope is my best advice, thou you may not be able to be at her side I am sure that she feels you there and that helps.............Keep up the great writes.... |
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Re: How Do You Help A Friend In Need?
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by brew on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 02:42:41 PM AEST
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The ocean we see is a big open space of water.....yet it isnt as far as one would think. Lil.advice, there is a plane, or baot..and not half the fare. If, this person is a great friend, who one wishes to see and help.......find a way to make it happen.! it is a SMALL world.! Sweet write.
Brew~ |
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Re: How Do You Help A Friend In Need?
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 03:10:26 PM AEST
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John, I cant express the emotions that this brings me......
No one like you understands what I am going thru atm even tho you havent known me for a long time you already bring much support and once again, you show such support by writing an amazing piece like this.
Not a million thank you's can express me graditude nor me appreciation.....
Thank you so much John.
Hugggsssss,
Nats. ~x~
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Re: How Do You Help A Friend In Need?
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 09:56:29 PM AEST
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A truly touching heart felt piece of poetry. You're a kind and wonderful friend to have written this for her. I'm sure she appreciates all of ur support. This will truly touch her heart. A beautiful write.
Hugs,
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Re: How Do You Help A Friend In Need?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 11:28:12 PM AEST
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She is very lucky to have you as her friend
All you can do is be there for her when she is down,someone to help her up again..
Very touching write
as far as the Atlantic Ocean if you were needed there i am sure you'd find a way.
God bless you and your friend
Hugggggggggs
~~~Michelle~~~ |
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Re: How Do You Help A Friend In Need?
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by Archie on
Thursday, 25th August 2005 @ 01:43:55 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this very well. When the heart is broken all we want to do is be by ourselves so that no one sees us cry. |
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